MY CHILDREN

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MY CHILDREN,ALL FIVE, ARE MY GREATEST ACCOMPLISHMENTS AND WHEN I SEE THEM I SEE THE ME I WANT TO BE.;-)

MY CHILDREN

My children are my heart.
  They reach down in the deepest part of me and      cause me to think deep thoughts.

I want them to be mine forever, but they will grow
and      seek out their own endeavors.

I wish I could protect them for all eternity.
   THEY MEAN SO MUCH TO ME!

They are clever and smart saying the things that are       in their hearts.
Trusting me with their deepest cares, giving me their secrets and funny tales.

Being their mother has brought me joy. Five heartbeats entwined in mine making me feel whole and complete.

Making me feel no need to seek further, all I need is right here all around me.

THERE WILL NEVER BE A LOVE AS PURE AS THIS ONE!

Even though, I will never again know the joy of waiting at times door. I will relish the future,and experience the present.

I look to the past and my heart beats lovingly for a love that will never part. A love cemented in my heart.

It will grow stronger each day as they grow and make their own way,

MY CHILDREN.
MY GREATEST ACCOMPLISHMENTS, MY JOY.


I LOVE ALL MY GIRLS AND BOYS.

TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY 07-04-10

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smoothdame commented on MY CHILDREN

12-17-2010

"a love cemented in my heart" my favorite line in this poem I like this poem and I like the way you presented it great job.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/19/2010

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate your opinion............E

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

ESSENCEOFLOVE’s Poems (66)

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Discussion 7
YOU MOVE ME 9
DIAMOND 7
TO MY DAUGHTER 4
TO MY SON 8
Here You Stand 6
MY MELODY 14
PLEASURE CENTER 15
MY FOUNTAIN 6
YOU GOT ME 6
SILKEN DREAMS 22
WORDS DON'T HURT 14
SEASONS 12
FIRESIDE CHAT 9
HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM 21
DO YOU KNOW 13
LOVE IS COLORBLIND 9
I CHOOSE 8
CREATURE 12
HUMILITY 10
SEEING YOU 15
Sitting here 9
FIRE AND DESIRE 8
TOGETHER WE ARE........ 5
MY HEART 5
PLEASE ME 9
MY LIFE 4
LIGHT 4
ISSUES 7
SLOW DOWN 2
TIRED 5
BY THE MOONLIGHT 3
YOUR LOVE 3
REJUVENATE ME 4
I ACHE 2
DEEP 2
BELIEF 7
MY WATER 7
I CARE ABOUT YOU 6
DARKNESS TO LIGHT 4
FINE 8
BEAUTIFUL 6
WHO AM I? 6
RAGE 6
MY EMOTIONS 2
PERFECTLY IMPERFECT 2
WANTING 5
WRONG 7
YOUR VOICE 3
NEVER SAY NEVER 5
DANGER 2
I'M HURT 5
REFLECTIONS ON MY LIFE 6
YOUR KISSES 2
Blind In The Forest 1
MY CHILDREN 1
MY NIGHTMARE 3
I'M HOOKED 4
BUTTERFLIES 3
WORDS 1
On a clear day 3
EXPLODE 6
BEAUTY 1
SAD 1
HIS HANDS 3
YOU 1