SEASONS

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MY ONE YEAR ANNIVERSARY POEM FOR MY HUSBAND.

SEASONS

EVERYTHING HAPPENS IN IT'S DUE SEASON.
THERE IS NO RHYME OR REASON.
YOU ARE IN SEASON TO ME.
 RIPE.
 FRESH.
 BURSTING.
I LOVE IT WHEN  YOU PLEASE ME.
SEASONS AND TIMES CHANGE.
SOMETIMES THERE IS NO TIME TO ARRANGE YOURSELF OR GET READY.
BECAUSE, SEASONS CHANGE AND ARE NOT ALWAYS STEADY.
LOVING YOU IS A SEASON UNTO ITSELF.
SUNNY AND GREEN.
BRIGHT WITH LIGHT.
FILLED WITH FLOWERS CAUSING DARK CLOUDS TO COWER.
THEY CAN'T STAND THE BRIGHTNESS.
THEY DON'T UNDERSTAND IT.
THEY WANT US TO BE LESS CANDID.
MY LOVE FOR YOU IS OPEN AND FREE.
IT IS MY FAVORITE PLACE TO BE.
BASKING IN THE GLOW AND GLORY OF YOUR LOVE.
FEELING LIKE IT'S SENT FROM HEAVEN ABOVE.
FEELING YOUR LOVE LIKE SPRING SHOWERS,
WAITING FOR YOUR ESSENCE TO COVER MY FLOWERS.
I WANT TO BE IN YOUR ARMS ON A COLD STARRY NIGHT,
WATCHING THE BATS TAKE THEIR NIGHTTIME FLIGHT.
WATCHING FLAKES AS THEY SHOWER OUR LOVE WITH GLISTENING SNOW FROM ABOVE.
FALLING LEAVES SHOWERING OUR LOVE WITH FALL COLORS THAT MAKE US REJOICE.
YOU ARE MY ONE AND ONLY CHOICE.
BEING WITH YOU MAKES ME FEEL SAFE AND SOUND.
NO MATTER THE SEASON, I WILL KEEP YOU AROUND.

TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY 04/30/00


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SILKYTWEED commented on SEASONS

12-08-2010

Great Write of Reflection on the happy feelings that characterize affection....thanks for sharing!

gogant commented on SEASONS

12-07-2010

You sing a melody of life with all the colors, feelings, and most of all.....love for the seasons of change.........Simply beautiful.........g

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/08/2010

Thank you, gogant. I appreciate you reading and responding. Your comments are encouraging and motivating......E

kdarcy commented on SEASONS

12-07-2010

A little mushy but, a great tribute to the one you love, passion is a good thing, be well, what a lucky guy k

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/08/2010

ROTFL. Yes I am a little mushy sometimes. It's a blessing. We are both very fortunate to have each other. Thanks for your comments..........E

kdarcy

12/08/2010

You are most welcome, lol k

Teardrops commented on SEASONS

12-07-2010

he loves you to and i know you feel it and every day . The flow is great and it makes the reader feel you passion for your husband great write my friend Marie

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/08/2010

I do. Thank you so much for your comments. They are heartwarming. I feel like I got across what I was trying to convey..........E

ApaqRasgirl commented on SEASONS

12-07-2010

wow, now that was simple stunning...I loved this unique style you have created adding a new season, that of lovers together.....wonderfully worded and well done with the metaphors used to describe the passion of your love for that special lover........a powerful poet you are of soft erotic poetry......I see a new unique style of erotic poetry to come from you soon......well done my friend.......loved it.........peace and light......Namaste love asha

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/07/2010

Thank you so much for your encouraging and motivating comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it..............E

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

ESSENCEOFLOVE’s Poems (66)

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Title Comments
Discussion 7
YOU MOVE ME 9
DIAMOND 7
TO MY DAUGHTER 4
TO MY SON 8
Here You Stand 6
MY MELODY 14
PLEASURE CENTER 15
MY FOUNTAIN 6
YOU GOT ME 6
SILKEN DREAMS 22
WORDS DON'T HURT 14
SEASONS 12
FIRESIDE CHAT 9
HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM 21
DO YOU KNOW 13
LOVE IS COLORBLIND 9
I CHOOSE 8
CREATURE 12
HUMILITY 10
SEEING YOU 15
Sitting here 9
FIRE AND DESIRE 8
TOGETHER WE ARE........ 5
MY HEART 5
PLEASE ME 9
MY LIFE 4
LIGHT 4
ISSUES 7
SLOW DOWN 2
TIRED 5
BY THE MOONLIGHT 3
YOUR LOVE 3
REJUVENATE ME 4
I ACHE 2
DEEP 2
BELIEF 7
MY WATER 7
I CARE ABOUT YOU 6
DARKNESS TO LIGHT 4
FINE 8
BEAUTIFUL 6
WHO AM I? 6
RAGE 6
MY EMOTIONS 2
PERFECTLY IMPERFECT 2
WANTING 5
WRONG 7
YOUR VOICE 3
NEVER SAY NEVER 5
DANGER 2
I'M HURT 5
REFLECTIONS ON MY LIFE 6
YOUR KISSES 2
Blind In The Forest 1
MY CHILDREN 1
MY NIGHTMARE 3
I'M HOOKED 4
BUTTERFLIES 3
WORDS 1
On a clear day 3
EXPLODE 6
BEAUTY 1
SAD 1
HIS HANDS 3
YOU 1