MY NIGHTMARE

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LIFE SEPARATED FROM THE FANTASY.

MY NIGHTMARE

MY REALITY IS A NIGHTMARE.
   IT HAS GIVEN ME THE BIGGEST SCARE.
I FEEL WORLD WEARY AND WORN LIKE I HAVE NOTHING TO SHARE.
    I WISH THIS FEELING I COULD SHAKE.
ALL THE PEOPLE IN MY LIFE TRY TO GIVE AND NOT TAKE.
    STILL I FEEL, LIKE I AM IN A BAD DREAM FROM WHICH I CANNOT AWAKE.
    A WAKING NIGHTMARE IS THE WORST OF ALL, BECAUSE THERE IS NO            SUDDEN WAKENING AND THE REALIZATION THAT THE DREAM  WASN'T REAL AT ALL.

MY REALITY IS A NIGHTMARE.

IT HAS GIVEN ME THE BIGGEST SCARE.



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djones commented on MY NIGHTMARE

09-29-2010

for real...i feel you on this.....................................................

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/01/2010

Thank you. It's a good feeling to now that I'm not alone. ;-)

shakeme4life commented on MY NIGHTMARE

09-26-2010

I hope and pray that this is from your imagination this write , it's is a nightmare living in this world...

ESSENCEOFLOVE

09/27/2010

Thank you so much! You are always in my prayers too. Just words that I had to get out. Write them out or act them out. I prefer to write.

truth917 commented on MY NIGHTMARE

09-26-2010

This is to be very true and scary. Alot of things that we go through today in reality on show to be nightmares. A very intriguing write

ESSENCEOFLOVE

09/27/2010

Thank you LeKing. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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