HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

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HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

IN THE HOSPITAL, I'M DRAWING A BLANK.
IN THE HOSPITAL, I HAVE A LOW RANK.
NO INSURANCE DO I HAVE.
TRYING TO BE BRAVE, I HOPE MY BODY WILL BEHAVE AND NOT BETRAY ME AS COUNTLESS OTHERS.
NOT ACT LIKE A CARELESS LOVER.
SITTING IN THIS ROOM, FIGHTING OFF THOUGHTS OF DOOM AND GLOOM.
MY CHEST IS HURTING.
IT'S HARD TO BREATHE.
WILL I EVER GET RELIEF?
THIS PACKED WAITING ROOM IS BEYOND BELIEF.
WHO DO I SEE?
WHO ELSE, BUT MY LOVE.
SENT TO ME LIKE AN ANGEL FROM ABOVE.
TO STAY WITH ME.
TO BRING ME PEACE.
TO GIVE ME A SENSE OF EMOTIONAL RELIEF.
EVEN THOUGH, MY PHYSICAL PAIN IS GREAT, TO MY BODY I AM IN TUNE AND CAN RELATE.
I AM SICK AND TIRED OF THIS WAIT!!!
TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY 10/10

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Tyme commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

02-23-2011

8-12 hours...that's the expected wait time in an average EMERGENCY ROOM!!! Hello, did I miss something??? I like.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

04/28/2011

lol!! exactly my point. thank you for reading and commenting..........E

FranzJ commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

12-05-2010

being a retired Firefighter and EMT, I know what hospotal ERs can be light - if it was a weekend it was crowded (the gun and knife club) if during ythe week its a roll of the dice - good luck in the future

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/05/2010

Thank you for reading and responding as well as your well wishes.........E

cousinsoren commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

12-05-2010

A great capture of a moment in time! My rating for a superb mix of feelings, anxiety and relief, as well as for appropriatee diction is 10+ Reply to Comment

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/05/2010

Thank you for reading and commenting.........E

cousinsoren commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

12-05-2010

A great capture of a moment in time! My rating for a superb mix of feelings, anxiety and relief, as well as for appropriatee diciton is 10+

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/05/2010

Thank you for your feedback. It is very much appreciated........E

smoothdame commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

12-01-2010

good job I like this poem because hospitals can make you crazy it is always good to have company.

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Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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YOU MOVE ME 9
DIAMOND 7
TO MY DAUGHTER 4
TO MY SON 8
Here You Stand 6
MY MELODY 14
PLEASURE CENTER 15
MY FOUNTAIN 6
YOU GOT ME 6
SILKEN DREAMS 22
WORDS DON'T HURT 14
SEASONS 12
FIRESIDE CHAT 9
HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM 21
DO YOU KNOW 13
LOVE IS COLORBLIND 9
I CHOOSE 8
CREATURE 12
HUMILITY 10
SEEING YOU 15
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FIRE AND DESIRE 8
TOGETHER WE ARE........ 5
MY HEART 5
PLEASE ME 9
MY LIFE 4
LIGHT 4
ISSUES 7
SLOW DOWN 2
TIRED 5
BY THE MOONLIGHT 3
YOUR LOVE 3
REJUVENATE ME 4
I ACHE 2
DEEP 2
BELIEF 7
MY WATER 7
I CARE ABOUT YOU 6
DARKNESS TO LIGHT 4
FINE 8
BEAUTIFUL 6
WHO AM I? 6
RAGE 6
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PERFECTLY IMPERFECT 2
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MY NIGHTMARE 3
I'M HOOKED 4
BUTTERFLIES 3
WORDS 1
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EXPLODE 6
BEAUTY 1
SAD 1
HIS HANDS 3
YOU 1