I'M HOOKED

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I'M HOOKED

I'M HOOKED!
YOUR LOVE HAS GOT ME SHOOK.
I WONDER WHAT YOU FEEL FOR ME.
NOW, THAT YOU'VE HAD ME, WILL
YOU TAKE A SECOND LOOK?
WILL YOU RESPECT ME?
WILL YOU LOVE ME?
WILL YOU SEE ME THE WAY
 MY FATHER ABOVE DOES?
ONE TASTE OF YOU AND I WANT
TO GIVE MY ALL.
TO OPEN MY MOUTH AND LET YOU
SEE MY MIND.
LET YOU KNOW MY FEELINGS AND HOPE
YOU RETURN THEM IN KIND.
I GAVE MYSELF TO YOU WILLINGLY.
SOMETIMES I REGRET IT.
SOMETIMES I DON'T.
SOMETIMES I WANT TO FALL IN
YOUR ARMS AGAIN,
SO YOU CAN PLACE YOURSELF IN,
MY HEART MY THOUGHTS,
MY NEST OF PASSION.
     I'M HOOKED!
EVERY TIME I THINK OF YOU,
I FEEL SURE.
SURE THAT I WANT YOU.
SURE THAT I COULD LOVE YOU.
 SURE THAT I WOULD PLACE NO ONE
BUT GOD ABOVE YOU.
     I'M HOOKED!
YOUR EYES REACH DOWN INTO
THE DEEPEST PART OF ME.
PARTS THAT THE NAKED EYE CAN'T SEE.
     I'M HOOKED!
YOU MAKE MY HEART FLUTTER WITH
JUST ONE LOOK.
YOU MAKE ME WANT TO FALL
TO YOUR CHARMS.
TO GIVE UP ALL MY GOODS AND
LAY IN YOUR ARMS.
     MAN
     I'M HOOKED!

TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY

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1SweetAngel commented on I'M HOOKED

09-30-2010

I've experienced this before, and prayed this as well, that the person would see and understand all that I am and have to offer, I was half right, they saw, but got scared because they didn't know what to do with it. This is wonderful, perfect 10 for me.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/01/2010

Thanks 1SweetAngel. I appreciate your feedback. The words separate me from the emotion so I don't feel it so strongly. The same thing happened to me exactly as you described. Nice to know I'm not the only one.;-)

truth917 commented on I'M HOOKED

09-30-2010

Emotions are unstable and so out of our hands but if you follow the heart it'll take you down a road to remember. Great write and show of expression

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/01/2010

Thanks for your feedback. A true statement indeed and hopefully we don't regret the road traveled.;0))))

shakeme4life commented on I'M HOOKED

09-26-2010

that is a mouthfull , i am scared of this hooked, will i come back to my senses , is what i'm thinking , yet his charm keeps pulling me in ...great . you the bomb , babe

ESSENCEOFLOVE

09/27/2010

Thanks darling!!

Chaos128 commented on I'M HOOKED

09-22-2010

Ha ha It's tough to keep emotions in check once they get warmed up. Just ride the rollercoaster and have fun : )

ESSENCEOFLOVE

09/23/2010

True indeed. Thanks for your input.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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