YOU MOVE ME

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My muse at work in my life.

YOU MOVE ME

YOU MOVE ME.
YOU MOVE ME IN WAYS NO ONE CAN IMITATE.
YOU MOVE ME IN WAYS THAT  I  APPRECIATE.
TO BE WITH YOU, TO SPEND TIME WITH YOU,
I CAN'T WAIT.
ALL MY WANTS AND NEEDS ARE EMBODIED IN YOU.
THE LOVE YOU PROVIDE IS EXCEPTIONAL.
YOU MOVE ME.
MOVE MY HEART AND MY SPIRIT.
YOUR LOVING WORDS, I LOVE TO HEAR THEM.
MOVE ME LIKE A MOVING TRAIN.
YOUR LOVE GIVES ME MINIMAL PAIN.
I LOVE WHEN YOU HOLD ME WHILE IT RAINS.
YOU MOVE ME.
THANK YOU FOR YOUR INSPIRATION.
YOU CAUSE ME TO FEEL ELATION.
I LOVE YOUR EYES.
WHEN YOU LOOK AT ME, MY HEART SOARS TO THE SKIES.
         YOU MOVE ME
TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY 1/22//11

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Tarlton009 commented on YOU MOVE ME

02-26-2014

a movement that is so clearly welcomed and overwhelmingly unexpected or perhaps it is expected but that the move itself would be more than what is thought to be. Your passion is so evident and your words are simple but fantastic. thank you for this it is very good, keep it up :)

cheronld commented on YOU MOVE ME

10-02-2011

I so love the title.....it caught me and made me feel the words....I love the simple approach to it but with punch that set the pace for this lovely write....nicely done as usual my friend...Cher

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/06/2011

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.............E

Knwldge commented on YOU MOVE ME

10-01-2011

Babygirl, u Knox this one outta the park, righteous kill

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/06/2011

Thanks. I still have our co-write. I am working on making it cohesive and a little less graphic. Thanks for reading and commenting.................E

smoothdame commented on YOU MOVE ME

09-19-2011

nicely done my friend I loved it. I loved the way you chose to rhyme but still stay true to the heart of the poem. Keep these poems coming.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/06/2011

Thanks for reading and commenting. You know I am a fan and respect your opinion...............E

Teardrops commented on YOU MOVE ME

09-15-2011

Well done my poet friend i loved it and you made goose bumps on my arms reading this Marie

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/06/2011

I'm glad I could move you and make you feel. Thanks for reading and commenting..................E

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ESSENCEOFLOVE’s Poems (66)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Discussion 7
YOU MOVE ME 9
DIAMOND 7
TO MY DAUGHTER 4
TO MY SON 8
Here You Stand 6
MY MELODY 14
PLEASURE CENTER 15
MY FOUNTAIN 6
YOU GOT ME 6
SILKEN DREAMS 22
WORDS DON'T HURT 14
SEASONS 12
FIRESIDE CHAT 9
HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM 21
DO YOU KNOW 13
LOVE IS COLORBLIND 9
I CHOOSE 8
CREATURE 12
HUMILITY 10
SEEING YOU 15
Sitting here 9
FIRE AND DESIRE 8
TOGETHER WE ARE........ 5
MY HEART 5
PLEASE ME 9
MY LIFE 4
LIGHT 4
ISSUES 7
SLOW DOWN 2
TIRED 5
BY THE MOONLIGHT 3
YOUR LOVE 3
REJUVENATE ME 4
I ACHE 2
DEEP 2
BELIEF 7
MY WATER 7
I CARE ABOUT YOU 6
DARKNESS TO LIGHT 4
FINE 8
BEAUTIFUL 6
WHO AM I? 6
RAGE 6
MY EMOTIONS 2
PERFECTLY IMPERFECT 2
WANTING 5
WRONG 7
YOUR VOICE 3
NEVER SAY NEVER 5
DANGER 2
I'M HURT 5
REFLECTIONS ON MY LIFE 6
YOUR KISSES 2
Blind In The Forest 1
MY CHILDREN 1
MY NIGHTMARE 3
I'M HOOKED 4
BUTTERFLIES 3
WORDS 1
On a clear day 3
EXPLODE 6
BEAUTY 1
SAD 1
HIS HANDS 3
YOU 1