FINE

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FINE

YOU ARE SO FINE.

I'M GLAD THAT YOUR MINE.

I WALK THIS LIFE WITH YOU.

GLAD I AM TO BE THE WIFE OF YOU.

YOU ARE SO FINE.

WHAT I LOVE ABOUT YOU THE MOST IS THAT YOU ARE SO KIND.

TO ME YOU ARE THE RAREST FIND.

ON THAT PAPER I WILL LOVINGLY CO-SIGN.

BECAUSE YOU MY LOVE, YOU ARE SO FINE.

TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY

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shakeme4life commented on FINE

10-17-2010

optimistic , is what this poem makes me , it made me thirsty ...lol for more

smoothdame commented on FINE

10-13-2010

Beautifully put well defined. This poem gives hope to those who are still in search of the perfect one for them. "To me you are the rarest find" this is the line that meant the most to me because it in my opinion has the most meaning. great job.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/13/2010

There is always hope. Thank you so much for your expressions and feedback...........E

Tyme commented on FINE

10-12-2010

"ON THAT PAPER I WILL LOVINGLY CO-SIGN"Co-signing your name is definately a trust issue. No more "I" and "me", now it's "us" and "we". (WOOO-HOOO!) I think this is the best line in the poem to me.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/13/2010

LOL.... I love the way you express your self. Thanks for your comments. The basis of any good relationship is trust.....E

Kanicki commented on FINE

10-12-2010

Nicely written thanks for sharing the love. peace and light

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/13/2010

Your welcome. Thank you for reading and commenting.....E

ApaqRasgirl commented on FINE

10-12-2010

that was very sweet and passionate.....a wonderful write for the one you love.......thanks for sharing........love asha

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/12/2010

Thank you Asha. I really appreciate your feedback..........E

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SEASONS 12
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YOU 1