MY MELODY

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MY MELODY

HE IS MY MELODY.
HE IS MY FUNK,
MY PASSION,
MY BEAT,
MY RHYTHM AND BLUES.
MY JAZZ, MY POP, MY SOUL, MY LOVE, MY LIFE, EVEN WHEN IT'S FILLED WITH STRIFE.

HE IS MY MELODY.
MY TUNE,
 MY MOOD MUSIC,
MY ACE BOON COON.
HE FLOWS THROUGH ME. HE IS MY TEMPO KEEPING THE BEAT NEVER STACCATO.

THUMPING,
POUNDING,
MOVING,
GROOVING.
GIVING HIS ALL THROUGH IT ALL.
LOVING HIM KEEPS ME GROUNDED.

MY MELODY FLOWS LIKE MELODIOUS KEY EVERY NOTE SURE TO PLEASE.

HE GIVES ME HIS ALL WITHOUT RHYME OR REASON, THOUGHT OR PATTERN, PLACE OR SEASON.

HE IS MY MELODY.

I LOVE HIM. I NEED HIM. HE PLEASES ME.

TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY 12/10/10



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Topaz2011 commented on MY MELODY

01-14-2011

mmmm, I don't think you're talking about your son this time! (: nicely done.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

01/15/2011

LOL. No, not this time. Thank you for reading and commenting............E

Seongwoo commented on MY MELODY

01-11-2011

I enjoyed your melodies. Happy with you in imagination!

ESSENCEOFLOVE

01/15/2011

I love this comment. I'm glad you enjoyed................E

Len commented on MY MELODY

01-10-2011

You did a very good job of pouring your emotions into words and creating a picture of joyful noise.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

01/10/2011

Thank you for your feedback.........E

FordLove commented on MY MELODY

12-23-2010

Keep grooving to his music. You seem so happy. I felt that.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/26/2010

I will. Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it................E

HIP13044b commented on MY MELODY

12-22-2010

Your happiness shows with each line of this great write. Nicely done.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

12/22/2010

Thank you for reading and commenting................E

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

ESSENCEOFLOVE’s Poems (66)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Discussion 7
YOU MOVE ME 9
DIAMOND 7
TO MY DAUGHTER 4
TO MY SON 8
Here You Stand 6
MY MELODY 14
PLEASURE CENTER 15
MY FOUNTAIN 6
YOU GOT ME 6
SILKEN DREAMS 22
WORDS DON'T HURT 14
SEASONS 12
FIRESIDE CHAT 9
HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM 21
DO YOU KNOW 13
LOVE IS COLORBLIND 9
I CHOOSE 8
CREATURE 12
HUMILITY 10
SEEING YOU 15
Sitting here 9
FIRE AND DESIRE 8
TOGETHER WE ARE........ 5
MY HEART 5
PLEASE ME 9
MY LIFE 4
LIGHT 4
ISSUES 7
SLOW DOWN 2
TIRED 5
BY THE MOONLIGHT 3
YOUR LOVE 3
REJUVENATE ME 4
I ACHE 2
DEEP 2
BELIEF 7
MY WATER 7
I CARE ABOUT YOU 6
DARKNESS TO LIGHT 4
FINE 8
BEAUTIFUL 6
WHO AM I? 6
RAGE 6
MY EMOTIONS 2
PERFECTLY IMPERFECT 2
WANTING 5
WRONG 7
YOUR VOICE 3
NEVER SAY NEVER 5
DANGER 2
I'M HURT 5
REFLECTIONS ON MY LIFE 6
YOUR KISSES 2
Blind In The Forest 1
MY CHILDREN 1
MY NIGHTMARE 3
I'M HOOKED 4
BUTTERFLIES 3
WORDS 1
On a clear day 3
EXPLODE 6
BEAUTY 1
SAD 1
HIS HANDS 3
YOU 1