My Deepest Pain, My Truest Fear

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My Deepest Pain, My Truest Fear

Please tell me love;

What is it you do fear?

That nagging terror,

That dogs you so?

 

It is not death,

Nor elegant pain.

You fear not

To be alone,

Nor emptiness’ bleak end.

To be forgotten,

Worries you not.

So what my dear,

Oh my truest love,

What is it you do fear?

 

It is not the pain,

Nor death’s empty end.

I fear not to be alone,

Nor the eradication

Of my memory.

To be forgotten

Is no great thing

It is, my truest love,

My sweet valentine,

The pain to come,

That which ripples out

From my demise.

For the only sting,

I cannot endure,

Is the affliction

Of my dear friends.

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redbloodink commented on My Deepest Pain, My Truest Fear

06-11-2010

wow how emotional...... then I saw Kages name there liken this poem and I miss him .... even tho I never got to know him real well...... He just seemed to be a loving person.... write on ...... red

deathsolo commented on My Deepest Pain, My Truest Fear

06-11-2010

wow one word...DEEP...i like this poem...i love reading from different writers and getting the feel of them

Sydney commented on My Deepest Pain, My Truest Fear

01-11-2010

this is really good. and really in depth. keep on writing

Mextizo commented on My Deepest Pain, My Truest Fear

01-11-2010

in depth almost a lil complex i like it though very nice

kage commented on My Deepest Pain, My Truest Fear

01-11-2010

very in depth lots of nice words that explain the cause . i like it because i can identify with it and can see the person in quest of the answers nice work, real nice work

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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