Sights Unseen

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    Solving and proving limits is my inspiration.

    Sights Unseen

     The farawy stars are shining bright
    Behind these thick clouds of dapple gray.
    The royal moon, seated on high
    Majestic beyond our mortal sight.
    But through the leaf and branch,
    We view this deep reflection
    That remains unseen,
    Of the Midnight Dawn.

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    whiteoleander commented on Sights Unseen

    12-10-2009

    you know how to use the perfect words to deliver your piece i will have to read all of your poems now im hooked
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    cmlestrade commented on Sights Unseen

    09-20-2009

    Love this. I just used the term "the sky was a dappled gray." and haven't heard that in years. Great similes in this one . Royal moon also just points towards all of natures majesties. This was a very enjoyable piece.
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    blindmaster commented on Sights Unseen

    09-18-2009

    That is type full of symbolism. The leaf and the branch really stood out to me, is it a leaf and branch on the olive branch or some tree up in Maine? anyway it is nice I think I will use it to romance a female one day!
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    rougepriest commented on Sights Unseen

    09-18-2009

    nice choice of words if a little confusing how can ya view a reflection of an unseen thing, but its very nice to the ears
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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