I Had My Chance
I had my chance,But I leaped too late.
Now as I fall,
All I can do is wait.
I failed at every trial,
Mistakes at every turn,
and in the end,
with nothing left,
I can no longer even mourn.
I Had My Chance
11 Comments
But I leaped too late.
Now as I fall,
All I can do is wait.
I failed at every trial,
Mistakes at every turn,
and in the end,
with nothing left,
I can no longer even mourn.
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kalel commented on I Had My Chance
01-01-2011
- Wow, good work Sounding. Sums up every opportunity we have ever let pass. Write on bubba.
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blackfootlady commented on I Had My Chance
12-07-2010
- I agree with Hope.Some of the most simple pieces Become Alightened By the wit of the poet.God Bless-CHURV
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HopeOhlarik commented on I Had My Chance
12-07-2010
- Short and to the point. Sadly it rings true for many people. Good write!
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Totsa commented on I Had My Chance
10-03-2010
- though it's short but says a lot !!! sometimes we lose hope n all we can do is just givin' up ,,, i really like it
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Embraced commented on I Had My Chance
09-13-2010
- Sometimes pain and sorrow make their way into our lives. I hope after writing this and reading it made you feel better, because as a writer, you are very good. Thanks for the personal write. E~
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