She Still Does

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    She Still Does

    She still leaves a light on
    checks the closet door
    looks under the bed
    She still leaves the radio on
    trying to mask noises
    still straining to hear steps
    She still hides under the covers
    scared to breathe
    choking on her fear
    She still feels dirty
    can't wash off his smell
    unable to scrub his touch away

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    lonewolf commented on She Still Does

    02-13-2011

    wow! this gave me chills. very intense and very sad.

    redbloodink commented on She Still Does

    02-02-2010

    Intense write....... Lots of vivid wording... Painted a picture of one in a show continuously scrubbing themselves.... So just think you wrote it and painted it.... red

    Vincent commented on She Still Does

    02-04-2009

    This sounds serious, (GP) Smiles Vincent

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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