Yahweh

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    Yahweh
    as i am still before YOU
    YOUR faithfulness amazes me
    YOUR beauty takes my breath away
    in humility i offer my life
    asking YOU to strip away all of me
    reverently bowing before YOU
    my will in exchange for YOURS

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    spbsdude commented on Yahweh

    09-25-2009

    What a beautiful way to express your humility before your God. I like the way you are able to say so much in so few words, that s a talent in and of itself. Truly before our God we are exposed, since he can see all of us both what others see and what others can not see. Very nice.
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    graceladymn commented on Yahweh

    08-30-2009

    Truly magnificent is the Lord of Hosts who draws all to himself and fills the hearts of those who look deeply into his ways. Excellent short poem describing the indescribable.
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    loragoodnight commented on Yahweh

    08-26-2009

    This is awesome! I love the use of lowercase and capitol letters. You make a wonderful point just in your choice of the "i". My you be blessed as this poem as truely blessed me. Peace to your Heart, Lora
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    fluv77 commented on Yahweh

    03-04-2009

    like this one...
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    lonewolf commented on Yahweh

    01-12-2009

    This is a wonderful little poem. I wish I had written it.
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