You know what to say


  • JonTalbain
  • Didn't I tell you, what I believe... Did somebody say that....that love like that won't last? Didn't I give you all that I got to, give baby?

Poem Commentary

To someone who yearns for real love from someone that she knows will love her back

You know what to say

Here I am, I’m a cure to your ailing heart

I’ve come from the skies above

Sent by God himself to alleviate the broken heart you carry

My embraces are firm and strong, so you know you’re always safe with me

My kisses are legendary, known to leave a lovely lady like you quivering

My eyes, the color of amber are strong and piercings, revealing all truths put before them


So why am I here?

It’s not because I want to take you in my arms and cover your soft, delicious lips with mine

Or run my hands through your hair, but to tell you that I love everything about you

I could only lay in my rack at night, and dream of the fullness of your bosom up against me

Hands against my face, and eyes staring into mine

Voice in my ears, whispering all the naughty things you want me to do

I could only see you taking me by the hand, and leading me to someplace beautiful

I’m here, because I know what you crave, what you need

I’m here, baby girl, to give it to you

Be it on bended knee, or high above in the skies

I want to show you how wonderful your are


How could I ignore a woman, whose hair flows like the live giving Nile?

The very softness of her eyes hides such strength, but such a sensitive soul too.

I know them to be feminine and warm, but just as tough as the man who wants to love her

I can imagine those lips covering me with kisses that’s bound to rock my immortal soul

Such a small, lithe little body, that I would hold it close to me

I could drape our bed in roses, aloe and myrrh

Spend my nights relaxing your troubles away

Don’t fear me making love to you; I want to put you in a position of power that you’ll never fear again

I can feel that pull when you draw close, your voice alluring as it is addictive


So I’m standing here, ready to show you the world, and all you have to do is say …


That’s right, baby… just say yes to me, and I don’t need to promise you, nights like no other

You’re more than just a queen,

You’re as beautiful as The Sun, and eloquent as The Moon

I could, if you let me, deck you out in diamonds and pearls

Take you from the midst of negativity

And set you upon the countertops of love and prosperity


Don’t think these a promise, but see them as things I will do if you let me

Things I would gladly do without hope of reward, for your smile is that enough

Because love comes into its own, and as long as you let me, I can love you like no other.

All you have to do is say yes…

Just …Say…Yes…

And everything I say and more… is yours.

I give myself to you, present myself to you not just as a lover, but as a friend, confidante and protector

Baby, All you gotta do is …Just… Say… Yes

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blvdobd2009 commented on You know what to say


You said what my soul needed to hear...I just keep reading this poem over and over,Your words are addictions

blvdobd2009 commented on You know what to say


that is in it purest form in one word beautiful.... Its simply beautiful.,...

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

JonTalbain’s Poems (75)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Carnality 0
For a Love I won't forget 1
Happily Ever After (Part 2) 1
Confessions of the soul 2
Perdition 3
Somebody Already Broke My Heart 3
The story untold 1
Drive Me Insane 2
So Tired 0
A Child's Hell 2
They Say... 0
You 0
Goodbye 1
Self Destruction 1
Asylum 0
The Coming Rainstorm (Pt.2) 1
Waking up inside 0
Tell me Which is You? 1
A Glimpse 1
Slash 2
Breezes 1
Silenced 2
The Emotional Runaway Train 1
Before you make the step… 3
Into the Wastelands 1
And So it Seems that... 3
Holding on tight 1
The Silence 1
The Warriors Ethos 1
The Coming Rainstorm 1
Whatever it may be 2
Suffering 4
Memories 3
Inevitable 2
My Truth 1
Whispers... 2
You know what to say 2
The Man that Was... 0
Who I am 5
This is how it works.... 1
Come 1
Shaken 1
When Love Truly Awakens 2
Transcending Love 3
Maybe its just... 1
A thought 0
the pain 1
really? 0
A lost soul 0
Remember me 1
Drowning 1
The darkness 0
??? 0
Calling for help 0
Empty 0
naptime 0
Slivers of shades 1
Only you are the life among the dead 0
A prayer 0
Moonlight 0
Armageddon 0
A Kiss 0
Drawn in 0
whispers 0
Am I wrong? 1
From the pen of a soldier... 1
For Once Upon a Time... 1
The Flame... 0
When all your wishes... 0
Dancing again... 1
unsure 1
You see today... 1
Whispering Voices 0
Addicted 1