• JonTalbain
  • Didn't I tell you, what I believe... Did somebody say that....that love like that won't last? Didn't I give you all that I got to, give baby?

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Something that every man knows when he might have found the right one.


So it seemed
That from nowhere, you came into my life
Sweeping me away like a torrential rain in the desert
The very passion that falls from your lips
Stirred my very dreams, burned deep within my soul
That lately, I could almost think I love you
But I barely know you and only begun to truly understand you.

In a flash, like lightning, you've come to be a world unlike any other
In your eyes, I find peace
Your heart, love
and in your lap, sustenance and passion
Who could dare deny that I've become, through whispers
enraptured by your grace, and your femininity?
I only know that I want you to hold on to me and never let me go
Even into my dreams, your voice, your image has permeated
soaking into my very soul that makes me want you more than ever

Like the sound of booming thunder
My heart beats so strongly, that it frightens me when I feel the way I do
Never have I ever knew myself to be so headlong...
So far caught in my passion, my understanding, my wanting...
How could this be, from meager beginnings to now
that I find myself in the whispers of the desert winds
listening for your voice
to hear you call my name...
to tell me...
That you love me...

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DeepEclipse commented on Whispers...


Strong sense of emotion here. Holding nothing back. It is inspirational to see this in a society that tries to harden the heart. Its like a force that sneaks up on you and before you know it it starts affecting your every action :) Soft spoken and true piece.

blvdobd2009 commented on Whispers...


wow, again you managed to engross me completely, stunn me speechless and stir me emotionally, whoever she is that has got your attention, better hold on for dear life, and im sure that she feels the very words that you are longing to hear....

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

JonTalbain’s Poems (75)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Carnality 0
For a Love I won't forget 1
Happily Ever After (Part 2) 1
Confessions of the soul 2
Perdition 3
Somebody Already Broke My Heart 3
The story untold 1
Drive Me Insane 2
So Tired 0
A Child's Hell 2
They Say... 0
You 0
Goodbye 1
Self Destruction 1
Asylum 0
The Coming Rainstorm (Pt.2) 1
Waking up inside 0
Tell me Which is You? 1
A Glimpse 1
Slash 2
Breezes 1
Silenced 2
The Emotional Runaway Train 1
Before you make the step… 3
Into the Wastelands 1
And So it Seems that... 3
Holding on tight 1
The Silence 1
The Warriors Ethos 1
The Coming Rainstorm 1
Whatever it may be 2
Suffering 4
Memories 3
Inevitable 2
My Truth 1
Whispers... 2
You know what to say 2
The Man that Was... 0
Who I am 5
This is how it works.... 1
Come 1
Shaken 1
When Love Truly Awakens 2
Transcending Love 3
Maybe its just... 1
A thought 0
the pain 1
really? 0
A lost soul 0
Remember me 1
Drowning 1
The darkness 0
??? 0
Calling for help 0
Empty 0
naptime 0
Slivers of shades 1
Only you are the life among the dead 0
A prayer 0
Moonlight 0
Armageddon 0
A Kiss 0
Drawn in 0
whispers 0
Am I wrong? 1
From the pen of a soldier... 1
For Once Upon a Time... 1
The Flame... 0
When all your wishes... 0
Dancing again... 1
unsure 1
You see today... 1
Whispering Voices 0
Addicted 1