Brown eyes

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Brown eyes

So big, so beautiful, like pools of honey,
Like a candlelight glow looking back at me.
All I have of you are memories untainted by time,
locked away safely in the vault of my mind.
Your brown eyes so playful and pure,
Oh how they make me feel so safe and secure.
You see right through to the depths of my soul,
now being without you has really taken it's toll.
Bursting with frustration, knowing there's nothing i can do,
looking at your brown eyes wishing i had you.
Taunting myself with thoughts of us in times past,
knowing i was the cause we did not last.
Give me a sign, help me to see what you see,
through those brown eyes looking at me.
Let me know if there's a chance that again we could be.
Brown eyes you're driving me crazy! 

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ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Brown eyes

10-28-2010

I love the longing in this one. I can feel your ache and emotions seeping through every word. Good job...............E

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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