Have i lost you?

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    Have i lost you?

     

    Oh how is it you're are so expressive when u write?
     
    and when i reach out for you i can't see the light, 

     
    Only darkness, a void, that can't be filled,
     
    thoughts of you in times past and promises that can't be fulfilled.
     
    Damn! how i long for the sound of your voice, the way u'd make me feel,
     
    now i'm left to wonder if any of it was ever real... 

    i call you, only to find an automated message, or no response,
     
    you used to wait for me, you used to love me, once,
     
    how could you express such beautiful words when i feel so empty? 
     
    so lost, so confused, when i'm down you're not there to carry me... 
     
    My love, i miss u so... and i'm in my own world without you,
     
    i'm here now, reaching out for you, my love, where are you? 

     

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    smoothdame commented on Have i lost you?

    12-01-2010

    Such an honest question "Have I lost you" everyone wonders this sometime great job great poem I like it.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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