Don't Give Up

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    Don't Give Up

     Take one step forward
    and
         two steps back

    One little bump
    can
         lead you off track

    Fork in the road
    Both ways
                  DEAD END

    Now turn back around
    and
         Start over again

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    toredbloodink commented on Don't Give Up

    03-14-2017

    How how this has been so great short write.. My thinker started to work... My thoughts want to avoid the fork, in the road... Dead end start again. Loss gain riding this great train of life . happiness is love with an open heart.. Redbloodink is who I'll always be... Some times I come back here and write to be free... And this write that you placed out in time reminds me it's great to be free
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    Nadia1986 commented on Don't Give Up

    06-27-2012

    It's a great way of explaining the journey of life.
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    knight4696 commented on Don't Give Up

    04-03-2010

    Earthy - Got a kick outta this one... The inspiration is in it - but in a lighthearted way ... I have travelled this path for quite sometime myself! lol! Nice Job! :) Ken
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    devaamido commented on Don't Give Up

    03-26-2010

    Yup!! Story of my life too!!........................................brilliant!!
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    MindNumbing commented on Don't Give Up

    03-25-2010

    LOVE IT!!! So simple, but the message is abundant... bravo!
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