Finally

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    Finally

     I'm finally doing it
    I'm walking out the door
    he finally admitted
    he doesn't want this anymore.
    I don't know what kept me here
    I've known this for so long
    but I felt I had to stay
    to prove that we were strong
    and I was wrong.
    i didn't know when I made this choice
    it would uncover my shadowed soul
    but I feel excited for the future
    realizing I don't need this man to
    make me whole.
    It's going to be a tough journey
    walking this long road home
    but I'll get there someday
    and no longer feel alone.

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    CMarsh commented on Finally

    09-18-2009

    Great Job! Sometimes we don't want to believe we are wrong about choices we made but we learm from them. That want you express must be felt by both or traveling a one way street will surely come to an abrupt end.
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    fallenlove

    09/19/2009

    thank you for your comment

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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