Life

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    Life

    i can't re-write memories
    there is no changing the past
    i can't bottle up the good times
    just stretch them and make them last.
    i am one of many
    just a grain of sand
    trying to find a purpose
    for something i don't even understand.

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    heartmindsoul commented on Life

    10-28-2009

    I absolutely love it, yes u will ,sometimes a pot of coffee just takes to much time , but when it's ready it's um-um-good

    Sleeves commented on Life

    10-20-2009

    This is something we all go through in life at some point. Feeling small, lost, longing for the past and a different present, trying to find a path into the future. I like that you kept it short with a simple wording, yet the message comes through very clearly.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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