Living Hell

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Living Hell

swallowed by darkness
searching frantically for light
this tunnel closing in on me
not even room to fight.
i fear the worst
on my knees praying to a god
i don't even think can hear me
i can only pray
for a way out of this mess
a way to set my soul free.
would hell be better than a living hell?
surely that's the only place to go from here.
as my eyes close and my heart slows
i wish now only to disappear.

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inkmaster commented on Living Hell

11-25-2009

wow this is sad but a good read well writen...I liked it ..inkmaster

Qualin commented on Living Hell

07-18-2009

you are talented my opinion the best poet I have read...so far you should be published I think everyone on this site should read your material I will pass it along to all my friends...Qualin

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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