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    don't take offense, you should have called and I wouldn't feel this way

    Slack

     I'm fucking pissed
    this isn't a game
    we've spent so much time apart
    it isn't the same.
    where's the connection
    we had at the start?
    you want me to spend my life with you
    but you're fucking with my heart.
    it's been five hours
    but you were calling right back
    something needs to change
    you need to pick up slack.
    I love you boy but I'm so
    aggravated
    I'm still keeping the faith
    but my heart needs to be gated.
    you'd be better off now
    waiting until this feeling has
    disipated.

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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