The Faded Day

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The Faded Day

the stars in my eyes have faded
i see you for what you are
i see everything you've done to me
every lost hope down to the smallest scar.
the chain of love i was bound by
loosens from this starvation
i could just slip away and you'd
lose me in my extended vacation.
I stay close for this battle is not lost
there will be a new day tomorrow
I'll cling to this hope until you
slit my throat and i'm left to
drown in my sorrow.

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connsk8 commented on The Faded Day

06-13-2009

I love you ropenign line, no one shoul dhave to have thi smuch sorrow at such a tender age, and to start writng at 9, that is impressive, you sound like such a gentle,compassionate person that maybe has been taken advantage of and hurt of which I am sorry, keep writing and I hope life sends better things your way..no drowning please, life jackets coming your way..

fallenlove

08/24/2009

Thank You for your comment. i do appreciate it. *takes life jacket

fallenlove

08/24/2009

Thank You for your comment. i do appreciate it. *takes life jacket

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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