My Door

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    Just a little humor mixed with a little fun. Not directed toward or about anyone.

    My Door

    There is a knock at my door
    Perhaps a golden opportunity
    The bearer of bad news perhaps
    A friend waiting for me
    A bill collector I don't want to see
    A date waits for me with open arms
    A vacuum cleaner with a free shampooing
    If you buy it  you will get it
    There's a knock at my door
    I love girl scoot cookies
    They taste so good
    I think I will see
    It's the pizza man
    With a pizza for me










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    Lolee commented on My Door

    04-02-2010

    Every instance could be a knock at the door...don't you think? But when it's a pizza, well...that's the best kind of knock to have. I used to have a cat like the one in your picture. His name, for goodness sakes, was "Socker-Ball" When we called his name he came running!

    Bettysrainbow48

    04/03/2010

    Oh Thank you.They are my cats. Hey are you leaving???Where?? If you are you will be missed. That is what my email said.Keep in touch.

    SILKYTWEED commented on My Door

    12-07-2009

    Great Write....brilliant vivid style on being in the moment....thanks for sharing!

    Bettysrainbow48

    04/29/2010

    Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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