My Valentine

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    My Valentine

     The first day I saw you I knew
    It was your face I  first saw
    Your heart  touched my soul
    Your eyes sent me flying
    My heart began to thump
    To a beat of a different tune
    Like melted chocolate so sweet devine
    Your love and mine intertwine
    Together forever your heart and mine
    Your candy kisses coated with love
    Remind me your mine
    How lucky am I
    This Valentines day
    I want you to know
    How much I  love you so
    Your hand in mine
    Still melts my heart
    Your eyes penatrate my soul
    Because darling I still love you so

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    indiancowboy91 commented on My Valentine

    01-10-2010

    If my lady spoke words as these, I think our igloo would melt. Good work.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/11/2010

    Thank you I appreciate that comment.

    Marsink commented on My Valentine

    01-09-2010

    No question if love is here to stay...taken up residence and making the house a home. This is what love should be for all who venure into love's waters. Very lovely to be sure!
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/09/2010

    Thank you I appreciate the complement.

    mangeoart commented on My Valentine

    01-08-2010

    A man would be proud to have this poetry written just for him alone. It shows your love for that special one so sweetly.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/09/2010

    A gentleman would know. Thank you

    Teardrops commented on My Valentine

    01-08-2010

    Now you have put into words for the entire world to read of how tuly much you love him . The poem is form you heart you can tell and he will know it also thanks for letting me read this .
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/09/2010

    Thank you I appreciate your input on this. Love does come from the heart.

    ayyan commented on My Valentine

    01-08-2010

    Bettyrainbow, I have read the poem valentine fully. It is a good composition of the love. I agree the sense of love is fully shown The soul has taken a nice part of it. - ayyan-
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/09/2010

    Thank you so much.

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