Take me back

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In the pages of our memory we'll find the past.

Take me back

Walk with me take me back
When the streets bloomed
the wild flowers grew
Lake waters rippled fresh
Take me back

Willow tree branches hung
Where we used to sit
Heavenly breezes cooled our faces
Walk with me

The leaves would fall
Piled in a heap
Entertained us
Autumn met fall
Walk with me

Hand in hand we'd walk
Now just a memory
Sifts through my mind
In the pages of time
Walk with me




 

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dahlusion commented on Take me back

03-12-2010

such memories, such vivid memories, so dreamy and soft. Bravo!!

gogant commented on Take me back

02-11-2010

Ah Betty, to walk again those days of yore...to stroll casually once more...in reverie with the special person by our side. This is a lovely poem of reminiscence...................................gogant

Bettysrainbow48

02/11/2010

To be young and feel the earth the way it once was to us. Wow what a treat that would be

Marsink commented on Take me back

02-10-2010

A literal stroll down a wonderful memory lane! I can see the reason you'd want to return. Thanks for sharing a wonderful sentiment laced with a sauntering breeze.

Bettysrainbow48

02/11/2010

Remember the newness when life seemed so new ?Life was a head of us and not behind.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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