My world

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My world

In a land far far away,
There's a place I want to say.
The Earth speaks to my soul,
Being away takes its' toll.

It's the lilt in the air,
Rolling hills are everywhere.
It's the chimneys that smoke,
The spirit that never broke.

It sings of a time of old,
Where the people were brave and bold.
Magic is here and there,
The creatures have naught a care.

My soul it sings to me,
And is immediately set free.
It's in the way the lambs dance,
As if they're in some old trance.

The waves lap upon the shore,
It's like I've never been here before.
This world is my dream,
As tranquil as a bubbly stream.

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gogant commented on My world

12-01-2010

We should all be favored such a world.........You give it magic with this line, "It's the lilt in the air." Beautiful.........................gogant

gregster commented on My world

11-17-2010

world will be pleased of this...very nice poem.u are indeed talented

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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