Play the game

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    Poem Commentary

    This is a poem from a story i am writing i wanted to know if it flows well. Its a poem from my Story Broken Shadows.

    Play the game

    Im alone,
    In the shadows of the past,
    Memories burning me like fire,
    Some bathed in crimson blood,
    Others bathed in the crule light of fake love,
    My brain whispers to me
    Outcast play the game,
    Play the game of russian roulette,
    I smile as I look over,
    The black barel smiling back,
    I hold it to my head.
    Pull the trigger
    A bang echoing in through my walls,
    I dont look up,
    I cant,
    I played and lost,
    I gave it all  up,
    was it worth it,
    I ask as Im falling into the darkness.
    Then I hear the chants of others,
    Play the game,
    Its okay you wont lose!

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    Jordan98 commented on Play the game

    10-09-2010

    yes that is exactly how i feel except not a gun but knives

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    Falling Petals 0
    Into the Dark 0
    Daydream 1
    I know Now 0
    Brought back 0
    CHosing who you are 0
    Belive 1
    Over 2
    Tea Party Of the crazy 0
    I was not Bore of this Day 1
    Words Unwritten 2
    Wonderland 2
    Reach out 2
    Locked up 2
    Rembering 3
    Pulling me Down 1
    Shatter 3
    Nightmares 3
    Pyro 2
    Monster 3
    Play the game 1
    Insanity 2
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    Dances with death. 0
    For the Colors of the world. 0
    The first cut. 1
    Dance of the dead 0
    Myself 1
    Hugging the blade 3
    Time can heal broken hearts 1
    I want you. 0
    Why? 0
    My world 1
    Sunrise on the Water 1
    Memories Woven thin 1
    Why would you? 1