Tainted

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    Poem Commentary

    Wrote this just a while ago. Talking about people living a double life.

    Tainted

    A shadow so dark, a heart so cold
    a place only evil can thrive.
    In his eyes, I can see the blood
    of those in which he has taken.

    He is human, and yet so inhuman
    a person with little remorse.
    For the lives he has destroyed
    he is simply what he is.

    An assassin to life; he does not belong
    among those who are social.
    For in the end, he is what he is
    he is more than human.

    A shroud of darkness, cloaked by light
    He lives a life of two.
    Minister by day, assassin by night
    he is the yin and Yang.

    A claok of darkness, a shroud of hate
    they begin to reveal his nature.
    In the end, he is what he is
    An inhuman human being.

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    Viper89 commented on Tainted

    05-25-2011

    good and evil fighting for control over the same body! Interesting!

    Chaos128 commented on Tainted

    07-13-2010

    A philosophical horror story... I'm not educated to the point where I could accurately label your protagonist/antagonist, but whatever he is, he's certainly on top of the food chain. Very atmospheric and eerie!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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