Wishing Upon Words


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So im here in the library thinking about this guy... I dont have time to edit it, i dont think i should because these words just came out. Why fix words that came sraight from the heart..? Tell me what you think..

Wishing Upon Words

When I think of him

I wish the words sorry could erase the past

I wish the words I love you were strong enough to help us last.

When I feel alone

I wish the words I need you would make him appear

I wish the words goodbye didn’t fill me with fear

When I dream

I wish the words kiss me, allowed me to feel his lips against mine

I wish the words hold me, allowed me to feel safe in his arms, freezing time

When I cry..

I wish the words I miss you would bring him back

When I think of him

I wish I didn’t leave

I wish he wouldn’t of let me

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HarverTomsson commented on Wishing Upon Words


Older sadder wiser- words that poets know too well. Harv

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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