First Kiss

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    I just finished this song for a songwriting contest... Called American Songwriters.. Please wish me luck.... Hugs & Smiles, Mary

    First Kiss

     First Kiss

    (Song Lyrics)

     

    Verse 1

    When your lips first met mine

    A warm fuzzy rush

    Ran through my mind

    Thought I had been kissed before

    However, you blew that thought

    Right out the door

     

    Chorus

     

    I’m standing here in the flesh

    Wondering where this kiss will lead to next

    My hearts a flutter, what should I do

    I want to kiss you again, I truly do

     

    Verse 2

     

    Can I see you again tonight?

    A second kiss would be sheer delight

    I can’t seem to get you off my mind

    Tell me your heart feels the same as mine

    I feel like I have been hypnotized

    I want to feel that rush, one more time

     

    Chorus

     

    I’m standing here in the flesh

    Wondering where this kiss will lead to next

    My hearts a flutter, what should I do

    I want to kiss you again, I truly do

     

    Verse 3

     

    It feels like I’m falling in love

    For the very first time

    Spending every minute

    Thinking of our first kiss

    I feel like I’m the luckiest girl alive

    Tell me your heart is feeling like mine

     

    Chorus Out

     

    I’m standing here in the flesh

    Wondering where this kiss will lead to next

    My hearts a flutter, what should I do

    I want to kiss you again, I truly do

     

     

    Mary A. Eaton

    Copyright © MAE 2011

     

     

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    jec commented on First Kiss

    02-10-2011

    It is a must sing for ... Rod Steward ... maybe to tune of Your in My Heart ... well done Mareann
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    Redhead505 commented on First Kiss

    01-27-2011

    Very nice. I have one poem I've written about a first kiss. Would love for you to see it. Songwriting is fascinating to me, but I have no knowledge of how it is done. Looking forward to going to your site and listening.
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    Mareann

    01/27/2011

    Oh thankyou so much... Would so love to have you join, I think you will enjoy our site, it is warm and friendly and very talented artists as well. Come see us! Mary www.marysbridge.org

    HarverTomsson commented on First Kiss

    01-24-2011

    Now that you've confesesd to being a serial kisser,or at least conspiracy to commit serial kissing we'll have to figure out a proper sentence for you. LOL You oxytocin junkie, you! Harv
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    Mareann

    01/24/2011

    I'm laughing so hard... You tickle me Harver with the things you say to me!!!Out of all the things one could addicted to, Kissing doesn't seem to bad... There is something to be said for one special kiss, that does touch our hearts in warm and tender way. Thanks Harv., for reading and commenting!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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