I love you

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    • ladydraeko
    • What a year...and it keeps getting better...

    I love you

    You’ve wondered if it could be true

    The words that I speak to you

    You ponder and question and daydream often

    Staring at that sky overhead so blue

     

    It’s time for you to settle down

    And realize that the words I say

    My heart and head are both in sync

    And in love with you I stay

     

    Times of toil, frustration and grief

    May pass throughout our life

    However our love is strong enough

    To keep us together through strife

     

    Realize its true that my feelings are solid

    You are my rock and my heart come true

    There can’t be a moment now or ever

    When my heart will ever be blue

     

    Thank you my love

    For all that you are and do

    For this is my love letter

    Deep from inside my heart it’s true

     

    I love you

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    Gertrude commented on I love you

    06-05-2009

    Awwww! This is a beautiful love letter! When love is good it's the most wonderful feeling in the world.
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    kdavidscott1 commented on I love you

    06-05-2009

    No better way to explain it Lady' - truly he has to understand this without a shadow of doubt - excellent Lady.... KD
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    Chi commented on I love you

    06-03-2009

    Who ever he is he's a lucky one............the word play is great . this is a personal poem and that can be use as a money maker in publishing markets even Hallmark Cards. Its worth copy writing for these reasons. i RATED THIS ONE A 60. Chi.
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    Indigogreen16 commented on I love you

    06-02-2009

    very nicely written, i enjoyed reading your work.................................................................................
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    Paolo commented on I love you

    06-01-2009

    Perhaps the hardest thing to do is write about love and be fresh and original. While it is difficult to critic a so personal work I have to say I found this poem boring. You have to ask if you'd want to read a poem again, I wouldn't this one.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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