• Life
    • ladydraeko
    • What a year...and it keeps getting better...

    Poem Commentary





    Dawn it touches, never knowing, never caring.

    A  seed sprouts, something dies, a voice cries.


    It spreads it’s wings and touches another.

    They swim together to the anointed place.

    Blossoms unfold and fall asunder.

    Two are one, constricted space.


    Dawn it touches, never knowing, never caring.

    A seed sprouts, something dies a voice cries.


    Poem Comments


    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    carmentis commented on Infinite


    this is very simple and very nice to the readers touch and eyes i thinnk it captures time very elgantly and well

    avengingangel commented on Infinite


    neat you are go good at this lol i.m jelous lol*wink* ------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    SilverGirl commented on Infinite


    I really like this one.. it leaves the imagination to run free.. no matter who reads it, they can relate to it in their own way.. I see it as conception.. (eek. mother of , I guess I would.. lmbo) Wonderful job.. It leaves me wanting to hear more.. My only change would be the name.. Infinite.. to Infinity.. but thats just me.. Love ya sis.. xoxo

    SuSpence commented on Infinite


    I really liked this poem, it is so short but still contains many great lines! I have to agree with anneliseh, I think my favorite is "Blossoms unfold and fall asunder". I have never written in this form before I may have to try it now.

    BDIsernhagen commented on Infinite


    Interesting how you fly to "Contrsicted space" in infinite. interesting juxtaposition. So if the dawn never touches it, is it dark? great read!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    ladydraeko’s Poems (22)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Amigo Mio 6
    Little Girl Lost 13
    Going Fishing 3
    Questions Abound 7
    Dancing with Mommy 9
    The First Birthday 8
    True Love and sweet bitterness 19
    To the sea 14
    Dear Mommy 14
    Choices 12
    The Ocean 5
    Who Am I? 12
    Following Me... 5
    Awake From Darkness 5
    Infinite 19
    The Dead of Night 12
    Life quickly changes - The story continues - 3
    The Search Complete 14
    My Hidden Self 6
    I love you 9
    Darkness Emerges 8
    Silent Serpent 21