Little Girl Lost

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    Little Girl Lost

    My little girl lost
    Awake in the world
    But sleeping through life
    Where does she go
    What does she do
    Just a little girl
    Trapped as a child
    Wanting to be grown
    Up all night
    Has no rules
    Doesn't obey
    Where does she go
    What does she do
    How can I reach her
    How can I teach her
    I'm so far away
    6/21/09

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    NJay commented on Little Girl Lost

    06-19-2010

    u really look sad. I can feel your emptiness, weary and fainted at heart for loosing your sleeping beauty.

    almartin1993 commented on Little Girl Lost

    09-27-2009

    wow, this is wonderful...10 all the way keep it up

    kamaldahal commented on Little Girl Lost

    09-18-2009

    ladydraeko, I found you in great sorrow. Your piece of heart lost somewhere and you are still unknown where she is. Keep yourself courageous, all are the rule of the world and conduct everything depends on divine's wish. I love your writing how the moment and situation of heartloss you have created. Be still more dareful. God might give you more power of intensity. Kamal

    jmylez commented on Little Girl Lost

    06-29-2009

    good work here,,today grow up is truely diff for kids today and some times they do seems to be very very far away from reality,,,,good job..

    Sydney commented on Little Girl Lost

    06-24-2009

    i understand your pain for the child. for i have experianced the same about my dad. its a great poem but it does work if you were specific on what else you can say. to describe.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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