Intermission

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The art of deliberation and contemplation

Intermission

Frozen snaphsots in single
Seconds as I urge my
Inner being to listen to
The thoughts of other people,
I have much to reply but
Why should I? I wonder,
Why do I always feel the need
To always express how I feel?

Let's reflect for a minute,

In stasis, Yet, I cannot bear to
Hold my tongue-For I am few
Among the crowd to actually hear
What those around me say...
Is this the way I choose to be
Or is something-pulling-my heart strings
To let it all out? This life is about
Questions and replies-One person
Has the answers we need,
Listen....Breathe!

As I inhale your subtle scents,
The intoxication of words run wild...
Maybe I am too much like the
Small child in the back of the classroom
Raising her hand incessantly, trying to
Get the teacher to gaze in this direction-
"Ask me! Ask me!" It's my small but honest
Confession that causes me deep reflection,
Considering prisms and rainbows
I Contemplate the messages received,

I reflect for a minute-
I stop and breathe, Inhale,
I pause....Then, I answer back.









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Insideme commented on Intermission

04-14-2011

NIce Job, discretion is the better part of Valor and thinking first is important in acheiving this.... You are right, it is good to go against the grain because so many fall in line with what is popular or accepted....hold fast to the morals you know in your heart because they are His Way. I admire your dedication to writing about things that matter to you. Great subject matter and wonderful writing here.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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