Lifeless

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Lifeless

Seeing the dead
Seeing zombies
Lifeless peoples figures
around me

They seem hollow
with artificial life
They're of the night

They're innermost being is demised
They're hemorrhaging heart Can no longer survive

Who will help our dying souls
Lost life and meaning
without a cause

Do you hear the cries
Can you hear them shrieking?
Hear them bleating
Crying out for someone with meaning

Lifeless

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Stryx commented on Lifeless

12-26-2009

We have been invited to a party and discovered we are alone.

BrittKun

12/26/2009

Humm I guess so? thanks for the comment!! : )

Teardrops commented on Lifeless

12-21-2009

The poem is good and true can you have life with no feelings no you cant

BrittKun

12/25/2009

Thanks for the comment!!! : )

MootPoint commented on Lifeless

12-21-2009

The walking dead. They are out there. Everywhere. Good Write!

BrittKun

12/25/2009

Thanks !! I so Glad you like it!!

Oblaidon commented on Lifeless

12-21-2009

Very good message. People walking around without meaning are without life. A 10 for me :)

BrittKun

12/25/2009

Thanks!!!!

Paige commented on Lifeless

12-11-2009

Very interesting, I definetely like this one. It's short, but carries a lot of meaning behind the words. Definite 10!

BrittKun

12/11/2009

Thanks!!!!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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