A Love Healing

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    A Love Healing

    I am feeling lots of pain

    I am in her passionate love chain

    My body is running through her beautiful flames

    My soul is crying in mercy for her gain

    She left me, why! Because of a misunderstanding

    Gone till whenever, hope her back all very raging

    For I am in deep compassion, really blazing

    My mind is the entire singing her name and all chasing

    I seek her back for my releasing

    In a cell down in hell still moaning

    My yell is loud buts it’s a rose akin to screaming

    Diamonds and pearls rain-like falling

    Thorns and brass buckles closed up chocking

    Crying and struggling, is she back, dreaming!

    Sweet lady, listen my heart is really throbbing

    Dark clouds, lightening, and storms all mocking

    Love in sorrow as forgiveness not deserving

    Is this worth it, yes and all in great growth learning

    Your kisses as gardens of lilies and so smoothing

    You are beautiful, true and amorously caring

    I love you more, forever in patience and now hoping

    Egyptian jewels and gold all below your sensitivity, no comparing

    Money I have not but your love brings wealth, just very amazing

    Segregation of wonderful joy in real matrimonial extravagant copulating

    You and I assembled in a blissful fire nicely cherishing

    A desire of affectionate river of freedom in just loving

    Early sunrise, birds giggling, where our hearts awake so calmly kissing

    Your amber eyes sparkling ready for rending

    My soul of glee in true melody

    My world rocked dancing and chanting

    This is my cry to you princess, a love in healing

    A true love in harmony where the sound of the harp is yet playing

    Our love established and keen in The Lord just boiling

     

     

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    cheronld commented on A Love Healing

    08-16-2010

    an interesting write...but also a bit perplexing at times for me....it still has alot of very nice sentiments and positive emotions which is nice to see....and the glimpse of pain could be felt...altogether it is nicely done...Cher

    gregster

    08/16/2010

    well said ......now u just got to read hopeless love and simple love ...they all relate

    tonia18 commented on A Love Healing

    06-24-2010

    i like it its realy good! theres alot of emotions in it

    gregster

    06/24/2010

    HI

    Seraphina commented on A Love Healing

    04-19-2010

    This is a beautiful poem. I like how everything flows. It's really heartfelt and reminds me of my lady love.

    gregster

    04/20/2010

    thanks.....GOD BLESS IN JESUS CHRIST NAME.......read other poems of mind too......you are great i like your poerty too

    snowyowl commented on A Love Healing

    02-14-2010

    You carry me mostly, but sorry to say that I feel that you tried to hard to carry the ...ing thing, and yet at the end you dropped it..and lost me with the last stanza... Just a question...is your love crying out to God or as you say the Holy Spirit, or a human love...? I know it could be both

    gregster

    02/16/2010

    thx for comment.i love critics and that is a little bit, why i write....what you read is what you get.......

    cheronld

    08/16/2010

    now thats a funny statement you made considering you don't offer that same courtesy when reading anothers poems....hmmm...hopefully next time you read a poem you will yourself accept at face value...criticism is one thing....but at times you have taken it too far....Cher

    winterkou commented on A Love Healing

    02-09-2010

    I love how your words flow so beautiful and speaks very descriptively. Nice work.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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