The Room

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    The Room

    It is dark and dull

    It carries the scene of the abnormal and the duels

    The flow of its scenery comes with a flood of
    nasty blood

    When one is inscribed he or she

    Feels frightened and threatened

    It comes with worried introspection

    One inside of it will always feel introverted

    The shaded shadows in it are intimidating

    And carries deficiency
    If one is delicate he or she will be of free
    dejected and rejected

    When in you can never be out

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on The Room

    05-06-2010

    great write, I could feel that dark depressing room, one which i would reach for the shades to open them. find your light of inspiration and follow it. beautiful words, thanks for sharing love Asha

    BringMeBullets commented on The Room

    05-06-2010

    A dark and evil feeling... I know of this room, I have been there plenty of times. You do a great job describing your feelings and emotions through words... It's great. Nice write. Thanks for sharing.

    gregster

    05/07/2010

    read my last four poems please or at least his pain our salvaton and beauty of a princess,,thank you darling

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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