-All I see is you-

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    -All I see is you-

    Looking out over the city, all the tiny lights merging together like in a painting; you pop into my mind.

    Your face, your eyes, your lips. With this fascinating veiw in front of me all I see is you.

    Your a part of my every being. Every freckle, every breath, every beat of my heart. Every step that I take, every word that I speak, you are with me.

    I cherish you when I am with you, I miss you when your gone. I inhale your scent while laying next to you, and hug your shirt when we're apart.

    A longing to be with you is an everyday battle, but distance does make the heart grow fonder. This I know is true because I fall more in love with you every time I see you.

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    stellar commented on -All I see is you-

    10-02-2009

    love the intensity of emotion in this poem......^_^ v
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    JosephWolfe commented on -All I see is you-

    06-08-2009

    I like this. It's very cute. It reminds me of that feeling of being with someone new, that warm feeling- where you miss them and think of them no matter where you are.
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    wildsaphire commented on -All I see is you-

    06-05-2009

    Its very easy to sense what your feeling by reading this poem. Great work! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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