-Just The Three of Us-

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  • MOMofTWINS
  • The greatest mistake you can make in life is to be continually fearing you will make one...

-Just The Three of Us-

Mother's view:

The three of us; So close we're like a set of conjoined triplets.
We fight together, grow together and stay together.
We've even gone through Hell together...

It broke my heart to tell them we had to go.
The tears on my face were hard not to show.
They went upstairs to say goodbye to their dad;
 I told them we did not have the time.
They said they wanted to kiss Daddy's cheek;
I said for now you'll have to settle for mine.
 
I rushed them to the truck and then we sped away;
Hoping he wouldn't wake up and see we'd gone astray.
From living in a beautiful house, with a lawn to play;
To a sleeping in our truck, every single day.
Eating cold food straight out of a can;
Sleeping cuddled up, to keep them as warm as I can.

 None of this matters, because we are all safe, and now its just the three of us.


Children's view:

We love our mommy, more than anyone else.
Shes holds us when we cry, and she cleans our house.
Mommy is usually happy, but right now she seems sad;
She said we have to leave and don't get to say bye to dad.

She made us run all the way to our big white truck;
And we whined because we didn't kiss daddy goodbye.
She jumped in her seat and drove really fast;
Tears are going to come, I can see them in her eyes.

Mommy said we're sleeping in our truck tonight;
But she told us that last night, too.
We're going to be very quiet for her;
She seems like shes in a sad mood.

We get to sleep cuddled up to mommy;
Which we never get to do.
We're pretty excited about that;
So we'll do what she asks us to do.

 We're glad there's no more yelling or blood from mommy's face, we're safe now, we can feel it.
Now its just the three of us.

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SuperDan commented on -Just The Three of Us-

10-09-2009

You are a very special writer and you have a special way of writing your emotions on paper

popi1668 commented on -Just The Three of Us-

07-22-2009

OMG!!!!!!!! You have a special way of putting the reader in the same place that you are and that's a special gift! KUDOS!!! Again, your words made me feel your pain,you're a very talented young lady that has captured my undivided attention! Keep expressing your pain because its doing you and me alot of good! Well done MOM of TWINS.......Peace and Blessings

spbsdude commented on -Just The Three of Us-

07-18-2009

Wow, pwerful and beatuiful and sad. You have talent. It tugs at the heart strings to hear what I assume is your tale of sadness. Sorry you had to go through all of that. Hope all is better now and that you are in a safe place. Keep writing and I'll keep reading your lovely poetry. Thanks for sharing.

optimistic commented on -Just The Three of Us-

07-18-2009

This poem was tramatic yet heart felt. this was a scene from my past when I was a child, only difference is it was a day in the car and nights after my mom in a motel with a Guy I never knew. I can see how the pain could do more than scar you for life this seems like it would leave blood wounds, yet these wounds heal God took you to a better place you got out when you could and now your words are stronger than they ever could be, your poetry is power it seems to relieve a struggle with powerful words and not any type of Bigotry you really touch me deeply with your words and how powerful this poem was with it set view strong beggining then held me until the end. One thing thou I wish there were more cause this was good.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

MOMofTWINS’s Poems (29)

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-No Holds Barred (Part 1)- 6
-That Beautiful Woman- 13
-Myself-- 19
-My Ride-- 7
-I'm Numb- 8
-My Senses- 4
-Her Shell- 8
-I am A Liar- 9
-What Can I do- 5
-Just The Three of Us- 4
-Herself- 5
-Mask of Sanity- 7
-A Heartbroken Kid- 13
-That Guy- 5
-My Poison- 1
-Unspoken Words- 3
-My green eyes- 10
-One single rose- 3
-Small Light- 8
-That is...- 1
-Take your time- 4
-Then again- 3
-All I see is you- 3
Simply put 5
-Soon seems way too long - 2
-Peep hole- 2
-Just for a moment- 4
-My life at the moment(when I was 16)- 5
-She was great- 4