-My Ride--

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    • The greatest mistake you can make in life is to be continually fearing you will make one...

    -My Ride--

    Your lookin good, smellin right and spittin that slick game;
    But you seem to be unaware this here woman does the same...

    I'm lookin as fly as a plane in the sky;
    Givin you feelings, as if you were high...

    Your thinkin in your head your gonna take me home;
    But tonight I'm goin home alone...

    Your tryin to convince me, showin me all sorts of bustle;
    But I play this game well, baby, don't get caught up in my hussle...


    Im like a spider, Im like a snake; Ill wrap you up and not let go;
    Till Ive gotten as much as I want from you, then Ill leave you to be alone...

    I bet your used to runnin the game, and bein in control;
    But this is how its gonna be; This is how I roll...

    You'll do what I say cuz Ive got you entranced with my body and green eyes;
    You'll tell me what I want to hear but within this truth are my lies...

    Your doin exactly what I want, But undenounced to you;
    The character I stricktly formed for you is what your playin right into...

    I dont mean to hurt your feelings, Don't mean to crush your pride;
    But this is how its gonna be, so jump on and take my ride...

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    SuperDan commented on -My Ride--

    11-04-2009

    LOL very cleaver and very witty and shows that you arent like other girls this ride of yours has been with. You actually have beauty and brains. Nicely written
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    Savant commented on -My Ride--

    11-02-2009

    LOL. MomDeuces!! very nice flow here. It sounds like the retort to my poem Targetless Player. Check it out. Wow, I never would have guessed you were a MACK. here I was thinking this was gonna be a poem about a car!
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    CHOK commented on -My Ride--

    10-27-2009

    a very sassy hard game. I like that. I hope the woman are really reading this carefully!!
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    BlaQReign commented on -My Ride--

    10-04-2009

    Alright Now, So let it be said, so let it be done...Straight forward pen...
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    Stryx commented on -My Ride--

    09-30-2009

    Pretty sassy, lady - and if you don't have sass, what good would you be? I like your poem, even though the rhythm and meter varies a bit.
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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