-Just for a moment-

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    -Just for a moment-
    Just for a moment I hear her laugh,
    it hits me like a ton of bricks.
    Then, just for a moment, she starts to sing.
    and suddenly I am calm.
    Sometimes she just shows up to see me,
    but always just for a moment.
    I see her walking and dancing a lot,
    but she's there just for a moment.
    When I'm crying I know she's there,
    because I see her just for a moment.
    When I'm hurt she always comes,
    to be with me just for a moment.
    She always watches over me,
    but never just for a moment.
    She may be gone physically,
    but she'll be with me for eternity.
    Not just for a moment.

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    SuperDan commented on -Just for a moment-

    11-04-2009

    Very beautiful and very emotional. You have a great way of putting your emotions into words. 10 as always
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    DESIRE2INSPIRE commented on -Just for a moment-

    07-17-2009

    Thats so beautiful. To be a mother of twins, and to have such a talent to write something as wonderful as this......... at a mere age of 20......wow.....your Mom would be so proud of you. I admire your strength and courage. I wish you many blessings. :) and inspiration to keep on sharing.
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    Allie commented on -Just for a moment-

    06-10-2009

    Another beautiful poem....Mother hood is an amazing gift we as women are given...We learn to appreciate our mothers more once we have become one...
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    ladydraeko commented on -Just for a moment-

    06-08-2009

    I totally relate to this poem and have one similar to it, not posted here but on my personal website its as if you read mine and wrote this wow. it has a lot of emotion and meaning in it and i love it keep writing!!! HUGS
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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