-Unspoken Words-

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  • MOMofTWINS
  • The greatest mistake you can make in life is to be continually fearing you will make one...

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Thank you, RyneishaB.

-Unspoken Words-

Before reading this poem please read 
"Spoken Word" by RyneishaB
http://www.originalpoetry.com/spoken-word_2


As his hands are around my neck I see through my protruding eyes the man I might lose my life to...

In the heat of the moment he shows me all he can do with his fists; as he unzips his pants I know this is not true bliss...

While hes saying sorry and begging me not to leave, its hard to remember that I can stand up and leave;
That I CAN fight back...

As he sends another blow to my face I realize my power is not in my beauty; my power is in my voice...

He doesnt charish my worth, and no he doesnt love me; but I love myself and thats all that really matters...

I tell him anyone who puts their hands on a woman doesnt deserve to be called a man;
I tell myself, hurry, get out while you can...

I run like the wind and leave that awful place, with nothing but the clothes on my body
and the bruises on my face...

But Im free...

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RyneishaB commented on -Unspoken Words-

06-16-2009

Wow...thats is dope fareal...im so glad it inspired you, i knew it would hit home for you...i love this poem it speaks to me and im glad mines spoke to you!!! Great job, of course i dont mind when your as talanted as you:)

FLAWLES commented on -Unspoken Words-

06-16-2009

This is great! I read this about a month ago. I like how you give props to Ryneisha's poem. Believe me, I know how it is to read a poem and get inspired. You did a good job. I'm sure she'll like this.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

MOMofTWINS’s Poems (29)

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-That Beautiful Woman- 13
-Myself-- 19
-My Ride-- 7
-I'm Numb- 8
-My Senses- 4
-Her Shell- 8
-I am A Liar- 9
-What Can I do- 5
-Just The Three of Us- 4
-Herself- 5
-Mask of Sanity- 7
-A Heartbroken Kid- 13
-That Guy- 5
-My Poison- 1
-Unspoken Words- 3
-My green eyes- 10
-One single rose- 3
-Small Light- 8
-That is...- 1
-Take your time- 4
-Then again- 3
-All I see is you- 3
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-Peep hole- 2
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-She was great- 4