-Peep hole-

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    • MOMofTWINS
    • The greatest mistake you can make in life is to be continually fearing you will make one...

    -Peep hole-

    I know you loved me,I know it's true.
    I know I should be OK by now,
    it's just hard living with-out you.
    I wasn't there for you,but I should have been.   
    Maybe Heaven needed you right then.
    We were each other's favorite;everybody knew.
    Jealousy and hatred have been pointed towards me;
    ever since you passed on through.
    A few of these people made it very clear,
    when they let go of you too soon;
    that the only ones they cared for were themselves,
    and sadly not me or you.
    The people who did that, they thought you were gone,
    were your sisters, I need not name.
    They thought they'd get away with what they had done,
    but to me you had explained their game.
    But miss you they will, when they get to Hell,
    because they'll only be able to see
    you in Heaven through a peep-hole
    .

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    SuperDan commented on -Peep hole-

    11-04-2009

    Well written. I feel this way about a certain member of my family as well

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    MOMofTWINS’s Poems (29)

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    -That Beautiful Woman- 13
    -Myself-- 19
    -My Ride-- 7
    -I'm Numb- 8
    -My Senses- 4
    -Her Shell- 8
    -I am A Liar- 9
    -What Can I do- 5
    -Just The Three of Us- 4
    -Herself- 5
    -Mask of Sanity- 7
    -A Heartbroken Kid- 13
    -That Guy- 5
    -My Poison- 1
    -Unspoken Words- 3
    -My green eyes- 10
    -One single rose- 3
    -Small Light- 8
    -That is...- 1
    -Take your time- 4
    -Then again- 3
    -All I see is you- 3
    Simply put 5
    -Soon seems way too long - 2
    -Peep hole- 2
    -Just for a moment- 4
    -My life at the moment(when I was 16)- 5
    -She was great- 4