-Soon seems way too long -

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    About my daughter, Suriya, and son, Damian.

    -Soon seems way too long -

    My angels are on their way now,
    I think about them all the time.
    I wonder what they are thinking,
    while I'm wondering what they're doing.
    I hope they're happy inside of me,
    But I can't wait for them to come out!
    I want to hold them and feed them,
    And give them everything that I can.
    My boy and girl will be here soon,
    But soon seems way too long.
    I want them in my arms,
    But I will be patient.
    Because no longer am I number one,
    My babies and their health come first.
    So wait I will do,
    Untill my children are ready to come out.

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    SuperDan commented on -Soon seems way too long -

    11-04-2009

    It is absolutely amazing a mothers love for her children and the way it is described here.
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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