-That Beautiful Woman-

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    I wrote this piece after an inspiring chat I had with ItzaMateo.

    Mateo,
    I hope you enjoy this.

    -That Beautiful Woman-

    I hear myself falling asleep;
    That deep, slow breathing that signifies rest and relaxation.
    My breathing slows even more and becomes steady as I drift off to begin dreaming...

    I see that woman again;
    The one Ive seen many times before in my deep sleep.
    That beautiful woman that likes to innocently run wild through my dreams...

    We dance,
    as if the earth started playing a song just for the two of us.
    We glide through the air; Over the trees and buildings, knowing this wont last forever...

    Knowing its time, with such passion
    she tenderly caresses me like no other has before.
    Her touch is so unique I feel her softness long after we part...

    I awake...
    I try so hard to fall back asleep, but I can't.
    I know I will see her again, its just a matter of time;
    A matter of beautiful time for me to see that beautiful woman once again.



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    sheppaja commented on -That Beautiful Woman-

    10-29-2010

    This leads me to believe it is you you see in your dreams. Beautifully written. Good luck with your twins.
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    devaamido commented on -That Beautiful Woman-

    03-24-2010

    Beautiful, tender & engagingly shy almost tentative syntax. Very effective 10 for me
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    SuperDan commented on -That Beautiful Woman-

    11-04-2009

    Wonderful way of word usage and a way for us as the readers to see the dream for ourselves. thats what it means to be a writer right?
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    photochick commented on -That Beautiful Woman-

    11-03-2009

    grand imagery and i like that you have your own style to writing grand flow and structure you really have the reader hooked from start to finish i look forward to reading more of your work
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    nugen966 commented on -That Beautiful Woman-

    10-28-2009

    Okay, I love your voice. The way you write and the imagery you use is masterful. I am not sure what you were saying but from my perception, it reads as if you are either loving yourself in the dream or dreaming of a true love you hide from the world. I really love this poem. I will read your others.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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