-Then again-

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    -Then again-

    The tears in my eyes express the pain that I feel.

     The lump in my throat reveals Im trying hard to swallow it.

     The knots in my stomach remind me that Im not ok.

      But then again...

      The tears in my eyes could express you; a joy so overwhelming.

      The lump in my throat could reveal where you make my heart jump.

    And the knots in my stomch could remind me of how much I love you.

     

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    Tempestlady commented on -Then again-

    07-08-2009

    You get it coming and going huh? It gets easier. I love the dichotomy and honesty of the piece. It is all about what perspective you choose to look at. Good write.....

    wildsaphire commented on -Then again-

    06-05-2009

    I love how its double sided, looking at it both of how you may feel, verses on how it may look to someone else. Very well done.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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