-Take your time-

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    -Take your time-

    Take your time and touch me, in all my secret spot; like only you can do, you know you get me hot.

    Take your time and taste me, in every single way; make me surrender, baby, till night turns to day.

    Take your time and love me, from my head to my toes; we'll keep this secret from your girl, nobody has to know...

    That you took your time to love me, from my head to my toes; every inch of my body was in your control.

    You took your time to taste me, in every single way. Every crevice, every curve; I was at your dismay.

    You took your time to touch me, in all my secret spots; all my muscles were tight, then my body just dropped...

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    FLAWLES commented on -Take your time-

    06-11-2009

    Very good. I like how it "goes up, then comes down". No pun intended. I can see this from a female's point of view. I like it.
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    Mrpoetry commented on -Take your time-

    06-05-2009

    Make sure that man you are with treats you like a queen and loves like Christ loves the church because loves never hurts. That man shall be your husband and you his wife because he will love you for the rest of your life
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    jenifer commented on -Take your time-

    06-05-2009

    hmm,man i wish a man would make love to me instead of just wanting to fuck me , i wish they'd take there time to just love me . keep up the good work.
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    jasonbourne1234 commented on -Take your time-

    06-04-2009

    WoW! That is VERY hot!!! totally LOVE IT! SO..can i take my time on you??? ; )
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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