Leaving You

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    Leaving You
    I left you sitting on the bed
    My bags lined up ready to go
    I stood by the window
    A lone tear, marking me
    A small smile spared for you
    But I am still leaving

    With me I take our three years
    Long enough to love
    To short for arguments
    But I'm still leaving

    Walking out that door
    I felt new life filling me
    I know we'll meet
    From time to time
    Crossing paths, never one
    Still the world is before me
    And I'm taking my leap
    Leaving your memory
    In a loved but disgarded heap,

    I saw you yesterday
    Leaving a sleazy cinema
    Arm flung over my imitation
    And turned away, ashamed
    You lie on your bed
    Flinging pictures at the wall
    Wondering if they will burn
    Wondering if you have the courage
    To move on
    See the world
    Love again...

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    Indigogreen16 commented on Leaving You

    06-06-2009

    Now, this is more like it, I'm witnessing your writing getting stronger with each new piece i read, keep up the good work! Very true....
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    bluskyinthenite commented on Leaving You

    04-28-2009

    I love this poem. Well done
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    thoth commented on Leaving You

    04-21-2009

    this is a GREAT piece. you have your first official fan
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