Out of Our Hands

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    Out of Our Hands

     exposed
    as a tidal-pool starfish
    no mortal danger looms
    yet nearly so, it seems

    clinging
    to blessed faith
    inherited, cultivated, central
    as an anchor through the gale

    waiting
    learning while leaning
    the ways of the waves
    tidal turnings of time, of love

    returning
    with grace and relief
    to the safety (and peril) of
    the vast and patient sea

    knowing
    the tides will turn anew
    frailty lives beside strength
    the phases come in their time

    amen

    MLS

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    Hampton commented on Out of Our Hands

    02-04-2010

    You have an excellent style that soothes the readers mind as he/she embraces your poem. Well done.
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    bloomingsun

    02/04/2010

    Thank you, Hampton, for your gracious comment. I am so happy to see you here again, and appreciate you taking time to read. Peace and blessings, Bloomingsun

    simoneaugustus commented on Out of Our Hands

    01-15-2010

    Incredibly powerful! I look forward to reading much more of your work!
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    bloomingsun

    01/15/2010

    I also look forward to reading more of yours. Thanks so much for your inspiring words! bloomingsun...

    tierra7 commented on Out of Our Hands

    01-06-2010

    WOW!! something worth the savor ......this is such an exquisite piece...hun you are a goddess of great creations....ty for the great share..bloomingsun....this is .very beautiful...NAMASTE..Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )
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    mangeoart commented on Out of Our Hands

    12-31-2009

    The waters run so deeply through our minds like the words of this wonderful piece of yours.
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    bloomingsun

    01/03/2010

    Yes, the waters run deeply. Sometimes they scare me, but putting words to paper always clears the waves! Thanks for stopping by and for your comment!

    SavVySam commented on Out of Our Hands

    12-31-2009

    I LOVE THIS! You are blessed with true poetic talent! I will drop by soon to check out new additions! Great work!
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    bloomingsun

    01/03/2010

    Hi Sam, please drop in to read anytime! I love to hear what others may see in my writing. Thanks for your kind comment, it is much appreciated...

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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